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poetic liscence to love

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Flaming red hot body,
The man of my dreams.
Silences my libido,
Or perhaps that's why it screams!
Caresses with personality,
That's why I love him so.
Breaks forbidden boundaries,
In which I wouldn't go!
A multitude of colors,
Some I barely knew.
Being here, I usually wouldn't,
But I am because of you!

You make me nothing but monogamous,
The apple of my eye.
A thousand daggers presented to me,
But I'd never make you cry!
They say we shouldn't be together,
But I could not care less.
They persist you are too good for me,
You tell them I'm the best!
I wish I could be more for you,
But I give you all I got.
If there's one thing I am certain,
Our love will never rot!

Once upon a time,
In a land not so far away.
I could write about you for hours,
There's just so much I could say!
But the reader must be tired,
Too bad that I care.
The point I guess I'm trying to make,
Is that you're so damn rare!
this is inspired by Tale of Brave Ulysses by Cream

if you have any questions about the poem, feel free to ask.

ALSO!!!!!!! I WOULD LIKE ADVICE ON WHAT TO DO BETTER!!!!
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FriendlyBlueberries's avatar
Aww thats so cute! And that this man exists... that makes the whole poem even better. I hope youll live happily together for a really long time if not forever!
Youre a really great writer by the way! :)
Too bad I cant guess the song :/